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« on: August 05, 2008, 02:53:20 AM »

I got a rough draft of the first page done.

Please tell me what you think? =)

http://gravitisrainbow.deviantart.com/art/First-Draft-Page-1-93865181
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Re: Please Look!
« Reply #1 on: August 05, 2008, 10:18:59 AM »

my 2 cents:

the only thing i would change would possibly be the font.

I dont know "fonts" very well and ive seen like a 7 inch book on the history and discovery channel specials on the 10,000+ fonts in the world...

sorry i digress...

is that "new times roman" font? - the text/font seems very 'newspaper-ish' to me and doesnt have the right "feel" for the setting of the first page.

Maybe im crazy and i dont know what the shit im talking about, but yah,

I think a "cooler" font/text would be more appropriate.

Sorry if that was too hard/mean/jerky  Lactose. because apparently everyone thinks im an asshole lately.   :P

On a random note, I think the Spy side of the character looks pretty sexy.
Now im curious what her Day-job side looks like. ;)

More random, Now I want to picture Lactose Scaling a wall in all black.
Cool. random daydreaming FTW. ;D
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« Reply #2 on: August 05, 2008, 08:12:43 PM »

yeah im not in love with that font either, but i hate comic sans, and i want something a little different, so im still playing around with it. =)
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« Reply #3 on: August 05, 2008, 08:51:00 PM »

Font is hella A Softer World.

Girl is very muscular-looking, could almost be a man with long hair. Not sure if that's intentional.

Your thread title makes it sound like you're selling rolex replicas.
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« Reply #4 on: August 05, 2008, 09:49:21 PM »

Your thread title makes it sound like you're selling rolex replicas.
xD Haha, so true.

Back to the topic though, I like it. (: But I agree on the font thing. I'd personally like that cracked ancient font-look.
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« Reply #5 on: August 06, 2008, 01:04:18 PM »

maybe i AM selling Roloxes?


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« Reply #6 on: August 06, 2008, 05:55:04 PM »

nothing like hidden product placement to want you buy stuff..

now im craving to randomly buy spy gear now.
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« Reply #7 on: August 06, 2008, 09:15:17 PM »

So lactose, when should I expect my shipment of rolexes?

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« Reply #8 on: August 07, 2008, 01:37:57 PM »

Lactose may i order a pair of X-ray or See thru Goggles?  :D

Spy work sounds like a lot of fun ;)
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« Reply #9 on: August 08, 2008, 11:04:21 PM »

phobia: in about a week or so

jerry: sorry, i only do rolexes. =P
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« Reply #10 on: August 11, 2008, 05:27:57 PM »

aww no spy gear? phooey.

anyway did u ever decide on a new font yet?
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« Reply #11 on: August 12, 2008, 12:20:56 AM »

we're not worrying about the font right now, i was told by the writer to not letter it yet, so we're going to deal with that later =)
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« Reply #12 on: August 12, 2008, 01:32:05 AM »



starting page 2 =)
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