Please Look!

[Lactose]

I got a rough draft of the first page done.

Please tell me what you think? =)

http://gravitisrainbow.deviantart.com/art/First-Draft-Page-1-93865181

[Jerry]

my 2 cents:

the only thing i would change would possibly be the font.

I dont know "fonts" very well and ive seen like a 7 inch book on the history and discovery channel specials on the 10,000+ fonts in the world...

sorry i digress...

is that "new times roman" font? - the text/font seems very 'newspaper-ish' to me and doesnt have the right "feel" for the setting of the first page.

Maybe im crazy and i dont know what the shit im talking about, but yah,

I think a "cooler" font/text would be more appropriate.

Sorry if that was too hard/mean/jerky  Lactose. because apparently everyone thinks im an asshole lately.   :P

On a random note, I think the Spy side of the character looks pretty sexy.
Now im curious what her Day-job side looks like. ;)

More random, Now I want to picture Lactose Scaling a wall in all black.
Cool. random daydreaming FTW. ;D

[Lactose]

yeah im not in love with that font either, but i hate comic sans, and i want something a little different, so im still playing around with it. =)

[mDuo13]

Font is hella A Softer World.

Girl is very muscular-looking, could almost be a man with long hair. Not sure if that's intentional.

Your thread title makes it sound like you're selling rolex replicas.

[SOawesomeness]

Your thread title makes it sound like you're selling rolex replicas.

xD Haha, so true.

Back to the topic though, I like it. (: But I agree on the font thing. I'd personally like that cracked ancient font-look.

[Lactose]

maybe i AM selling Roloxes?


=P

[Jerry]

nothing like hidden product placement to want you buy stuff..

now im craving to randomly buy spy gear now.

[XpHoBiaX]

So lactose, when should I expect my shipment of rolexes?

:D

[Jerry]

Lactose may i order a pair of X-ray or See thru Goggles?  :D

Spy work sounds like a lot of fun ;)

[Lactose]

phobia: in about a week or so

jerry: sorry, i only do rolexes. =P

[Jerry]

aww no spy gear? phooey.

anyway did u ever decide on a new font yet?

[Lactose]

we're not worrying about the font right now, i was told by the writer to not letter it yet, so we're going to deal with that later =)

[Lactose]

starting page 2 =)