I got a rough draft of the first page done.
Please tell me what you think? =)
http://gravitisrainbow.deviantart.com/art/First-Draft-Page-1-93865181
my 2 cents:
the only thing i would change would possibly be the font.
I dont know "fonts" very well and ive seen like a 7 inch book on the history and discovery channel specials on the 10,000+ fonts in the world...
sorry i digress...
is that "new times roman" font? - the text/font seems very 'newspaper-ish' to me and doesnt have the right "feel" for the setting of the first page.
Maybe im crazy and i dont know what the shit im talking about, but yah,
I think a "cooler" font/text would be more appropriate.
Sorry if that was too hard/mean/jerky Lactose. because apparently everyone thinks im an asshole lately. :P
On a random note, I think the Spy side of the character looks pretty sexy.
Now im curious what her Day-job side looks like. ;)
More random, Now I want to picture Lactose Scaling a wall in all black.
Cool. random daydreaming FTW. ;D
yeah im not in love with that font either, but i hate comic sans, and i want something a little different, so im still playing around with it. =)
Font is hella A Softer World.
Girl is very muscular-looking, could almost be a man with long hair. Not sure if that's intentional.
Your thread title makes it sound like you're selling rolex replicas.
Quote from: mDuo13 on August 05, 2008, 08:51:00 PM
Your thread title makes it sound like you're selling rolex replicas.
xD Haha, so true.
Back to the topic though, I like it. (: But I agree on the font thing. I'd personally like that cracked ancient font-look.
maybe i AM selling Roloxes?
=P
nothing like hidden product placement to want you buy stuff..
now im craving to randomly buy spy gear now.
So lactose, when should I expect my shipment of rolexes?
:D
Lactose may i order a pair of X-ray or See thru Goggles? :D
Spy work sounds like a lot of fun ;)
phobia: in about a week or so
jerry: sorry, i only do rolexes. =P
aww no spy gear? phooey.
anyway did u ever decide on a new font yet?
we're not worrying about the font right now, i was told by the writer to not letter it yet, so we're going to deal with that later =)
(https://forums.fanime.com/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fv455%2Fallthatyouare%2Fpage2frame1.jpg&hash=07e4e38ef6701f51c0b5c7594e83a16b1e160a5d)
starting page 2 =)